The School Carnival
By Lo Hoi Lam
Today is Saturday, my school has a wonderful party on this day. It's called The School Carnival. There are games stores, food stores and the lucky draw. I with my friend, Reddy, go to the party on this day.
First, we go to the game stores. The games are very interesting. After, we go to the food stores. The hot dogs are very yummy. Then, we want to have a lucky draw, but we get lost. When we look outside, there is a Garden Maze! We try to go there. We see a paper on the ground. I look at my watch. It's six o'clock. The lucky draw is started. "We must go out of this maze" I say. Then, I pick up the paper. It writes that you can't go outside of the maze. There has a treasure in the maze. But everyone can't find it out. Can you take the treasure? Surely it's impossible! We feel very angry after looking at the paper. We decide to go through the maze to take the treasure. After walking to the front of the maze, we see a statue. Suddenly, the statue opens his mouth. He says "Hello, children. You must go away. Here is very dangerous. Go away quickly!"
"But we must get the treasure. Although we miss the lucky draw, we must get the treasure first!" I say. Reddy also agrees my answer. The statue says it frightenly "OK! But I tell you two first. Last day, there were some detectives going inside of maze. Then they saw me. I told them here was very dangerous but they didn't hear my voice. When they went to the middle of the maze, suddenly, I heard a long scream. I don't know why until now." We still want to get the treasure. The statue only tells us how to get into the maze. at last, we say good bye to the statue and get on our way.
We go to the middle of the maze. We see a monster, Robby. He is very large. He eats people every day. "I remember it! I remember it! The detectives are here already." Reddy says it excitedly. "Oh! My goodness!" I say. The monster is sleeping. "He sleeps so sweet! What shall we do?" Reddy says. I say "You hide behind the tree. You can call me if you need help and I will hide behind the monster. If Robby wakes up. He can't find us. After, Robby wakes up, I put up my long knife quickly and strike to his body! Then, Robby is dead. Then, I see a thing inside Robby's mouth. Oh! It's the treasure! We feel very happy. We take the treasure to show to the statue. Reddy and I say "Our dream comes true!" When I wake up, Oh! It's just a dream! I will tell to my friend on the next time.